How to write 書き方ひとつ

今日までのブログを読んでみて、書き方が固い(硬いでもいいかも)としみじみ思う。

リンクにある友人のブログ(Beautiful Cloud)なんかを読むと大変読みやすい。

というか、読んでておもしろい。

内容がどう、という前に書き方が読ませる書き方なんだろうなと思う。

口語な感じで、これに比べると(比べるのもなんですが)全然感覚的な書き方。

だと思う。

別にそのまま彼の書き方をまねすることもないけれど、もうちょっと読む人も楽しめそうに書いてもいいんじゃないかな？とも思ったり、思わなかったり。

はてさて、自分は誰に対してブログを書いてるんだろう？

As i have read my blog until now, it really makes me think that it feels very stiff.
When i read my friend's blog via the link on this blog (it is written only in Japanese)

it's quite easy to read.

Or rather, fun to read.

Before talking about the subjects of what he writes, i suppose it's indeed the way he writes that makes people want to read it.
It's more spoken language and in comparison to this blog (there's nothing to compare though) his is more intuitively written. i think.

i don't need to just copy his way of writing, yet, i think it's maybe better to write this blog for people to have fun reading it. Or not?

Well, so, to whom am i writing my blog?